Tuesday, September 11, 2012

The secret life of bees-Critiquing

PART 2: CRITIQUING
What was the part or passage of the book that you liked the most so far? Why? Share your favorite passage on your personal blog page.  

Copy the passage you liked the most here. Write down the page #.Why do you like this passage?

Page 13~14

      The bag contained a pair of white cotton gloves stained
the color of age. When I pulled them out, I thought, Her very
hands were inside here. I feel foolish about it now, but one
time I stuffed the gloves with cotton balls and held them
through the night.


I like this passage, for some

reasons.

First, when I read over here,

I felt said about lily,
because she could not feel
about her mother's hand
since she was 4 years old.
She even does not remember
how her mother look like,
and nobody can told her
something about her mother.

Second, I felt warm and

touched  when Lily held the
gloves through the night,
because she must very happy
at that moment.
When she miss her mother,
there are something she can
feel about her.
























2 comments:

  1. I agree with your choice. And you have written a clear comment on the paragraph you choose. As my opinion, here the author shows the unfortunate childhood that Lily had. Although her mom was past in her age of forth, the God has left her the package of treasure from her mom. It is the only fortunate thing among her dark childhood. The bag is the thread of the whole book.

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  2. I agree with you. I think Lily is a really poor child. She lost her mother, and she had a sore life with her father. I think the bag is the only good memory from her mother.

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